Derrick's Documents

MICKY D'S GO OVER BOARD

Have you ever been to McDonald's? If you have, have you ever been real hungry and over ate? People are blaming McDonalds because of child obesites. I think if you over eat or stuff yourself this would happen. They also said by December all the Golden Arches super sizes would be gone.

                  Then McDonalds said that is ok because not that many people buy them and they don't get the money they want off of them.

To BE CONTINUED....

Hey everybody, the reason I didn't finish my blog is because I  didn't have enough time. So today I am going to finish what I started. 

                    One day, I woke up and I felt hair under my under arms. It was like hairboloza and went to the mirror and I had hair everywhere. I heard a noise in the kitchen so I went to go see who or what was causing the noise. When I went in there I saw two kids and a fine lookin lady. I said with authority,"What are you doing here. All of you need to leave except the fine look'n lady." Then they all started to laugh and said stop playing daddy. I looked around the room and saw pictures of those two kids and a photo of me and that hot lady in a picture. I must be dreaming, I tried to hit myself but I didn't wake up. Could this be a dream or for real, I thought to my self.                

                            When I went outside I saw this lamborghini, I jumped in it so fast the gas was already started. It had two 5 inch flat screen T.V.s in the back, and surround sound in the trunk. Before I left the driveway  I asked her what was her name she said Samyaih. Well then Samyaih if being married to you means having this car it might not be that bad being married to you. Then I took Samyaih and  then drove off. At that moment I woke up thinking I was driving a car.Then the librarian smacked me and told me to get a life and threw me out of the library.

                           WHAT HAVE YOU DREAMED OF THAT WAS INTERESTING BUT GOT CAUGHT NOT PAYING ATTENTION?

DREAMING IS FOR KIDS!

       One day, I woke up and I felt hair under my under arms. It was like hairboloza and went to the mirror and I had hair everywhere. heard a noise in the kitchen so I went go see who or what was causing the noise. When I went in there I saw two kids and a fine lookin lady. I said with authority,"What are you doing here. All of you need to leave except the beatiful women

                                To be continued...

NEW YEARS RESOLUTION!

My new years resolution is to become a better blogger. Blogging is a serous thing. I love weblogs but there is some things I can work on. Like putting a main topic, middle paragraph, and conclusion. The hard thing for me is when start to get lazy or tired and I try to take the short way into finish my paper. I really need to work on that because that would cause me not to be a good writer. Another thing is sentence fluency. It helps your sentences flow or  sound smooth. That's where details come in. You see my fellow readers without details you couldn't talk. If tried it would sound like" Go get box with pencils." See what I was trying to say is go get the box with color pencils. See A, An, and The are articles and articles describe. You have 3 types of adjectives that describes, Common, Proper, and Articles. Common adjectives are like soft or fat and skinny. Proper adjectives are always capitalize for  example @tlanla. Now I shared my resolution now you share yours.

   

             WHAT IS YOUR RESOLUTION AND WHY IS IT IMPORANT TO YOU?

TRUE BLOGGING!

                This is my first time really blogging. The steps are first you read, then you think about what you are reading. The third step is to make connections about what you are reading and what someone else is writing. You may decide to write about what you are reading and even do some linking as you go! What inspired me is Mr. Brune's student Chloe. She inspired me by her interview. She said things to the person she interviewed like what's your favorite color then they would make a scene out of a simple question. I think that was a good post to read. She brought comedy to writing and I love comedy! She had what to interview it was like mouth watering. The way she brought comedy to writing for example when she said:

C: What is your favorite movie that you acted in?


A: Ummm…I like the movie “Girls Rule Boys Drool” because the boys were like drooling a lot.

                    or when she said:

C: Last but not least, how old are you and when is your birthday?


A: First my birthday is in February on the 28th. And second of all is it any of your business how old I am?!?!

                             WHAT SOMETHING YOU DO THAT IS TRUE TO YOU!