WITHOUT YOU"LL THERE WOULD BE NO ME

I am so glad that I have friends and family that care about me. I usually don't think of the things people do for me. The first thing I want to talk about is my family. My family is important to me because they show me the right path to victory.

    My friends are like brothers and sisters to me. We care for each other and help them when our heads are down. When we get done fighting or arguing we make up an do our special hand shake. I am so glad to have friends like that.

     Last but not least I care about weblogs. Weblogs matter to me also because with out weblogs I would be a horrible writer. Also without weblogs I Wouldn't be able to change the world with my marvelous writing.

                                                What would change your life if you didn't have it?

Comments

[Anne_Davis]

Good post, Derrick! I could not agree with you more! Friends and family are very important.

I like that you care about weblogs, too. I think the more you get to write, the better your writing will become if you try hard, notice mistakes, and keep trying to improve. What do you find difficult when you are writing? Sometimes I have a hard time thinking of a good beginning.

Lots of things would change my life if I did not have some things I currently have but if I had no books I would really be lost. I love reading and having good books to read is important. I like that question you asked. How would you answer it?

Mrs. Davis

[alecia]

That can be true. Having family and friends. Everyone might like alife like that. Helping the world and your writting well that is wonderful.

[derrick]

Alot of things that I don't have probaly wouldn't make a difference in my life but friends and family would like the weblogs group I am in.

[Jason]

Your welcome for the comments! Tallyho!

[Nico]

That is a very cool way to write.Is that a class project?many kids in your class have been writing like that.anyway nice blog.