It's me again! You've read my post, The Writers Best Friend, right? If you haven't yet, click that hyperlink back there. If you have, enjoy the Six Traits of writing, compared to an office!
Ideas and Content-- The people who make up the office. Say the principal and the counselor.
Organization-- How the computers are arranged. The computers would be seperated by xp or 98 version.
Sentence Fluency-- Different sizes of paperwork. Difficult work would be a larger sentence in a script.
Conventions-- An unclaimed paycheck. It wouldn't show but it is still there.
Word Choice-- The Boss of the office. He chooses which workers are good enough for his office.
Voice-- How strong the paper expresses. Kinda how if a paper is written stongly about a certain topic.
Well how did you like them? I think metaphors are a great way to show The Six Traits of Writing! Catch U later!!!!!
~What would you change about my metaphors? ~