We are revising our first posts we made. I hope you think they are good.
Hello, my name is Zachary. I am older than most of my friends, but I sure don’t look like a pre-teen. I live sort of in the woods, around more houses; I think my best friends Alex, Jason, Derrick, and DEFINITELY Richard are really cool!
I am glad I was chosen as one of the Web Writers, and I love writing. It is a new experience to be back in school. I used to go to home school, it was fun! First of all, you get to sleep all you want before you get up. I usually got up around 11:00 AM! Also, you don't have to do school for 6 hours while your home-schooled! You only have to do school for four and a half hours!
The bad news is, I argued with my mom a lot. I didn't do homeschool anymore because I didn't want to put my mom through anymore stress. I also wanted to live my last year in elementary school in public school. Nobody used to like me except the kids in my weblog class, but I have lots of friends now!
I have two best friends that don’t call me names. They are Jason and Derrick! But thanks to weblogging, “Weblog Zachary” has ROCKED! YEAH!!!!!!
Well that was the revised version of "Zack's Awesome Introduction" and I hoped you liked it.
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