Erica's Dream of Blogs

The Six Traits of Writing

To write a good paragraph you need to know the six traits of writing

1.   Stimulating Ideas: Is to write interesting ideas and information.

2.  Logical Organization: Is to catch the reader’s attention.

3.  Personal Voice: Is to express ideas and feelings.

4.  Original Word Choice: To write good and colorful words.

5.  Smooth Sentences: To write different sentences.

Correct, Accurate Copy: Is to see back to cheek for errors

I "Am" Poem

      I am shy and nice.

I wonder if I pass grade.

Hear a tree talk.

I see a ghost under my bed.

I want to sing in a concert.

I am shy and nice.

I pretend I could fly.

I feel the cold wind in my   

I touch the hot sun.

I worry that the world will end.

I cry for my family.

I am shy and nice.

I understand some things.

I say don’t stop dreaming.

I dream I could sing.

I try my best in school.

I hope I could fly.

I am shy and nice.

Here Comes Wonderful Erica

Hi! My name is Erica. I’m little scare about blogs because I have never done this. But I think I will like this. Now I will talk about me. I like to jump ropes. I have a lot of friends. I like to be with my family all most all the time. I’m little shy some times. I wish I meet new friends. Well I have to go. Bye!