This is my last weblog,but I'll probably post over the summer. I'm not sure the title is spelled right. I tried to look it up in the dictionary,but it wasn't there. I want to thank a few certain people/commenters. First off I'd like to thank Bronwyn G, Mrs.Anne Davis,and Mrs.Meeler.Thanks for everything! And to everyone else thanks and have a happy summer!Bye and don't forget to look for new post over the summer.
This is a post about what we'll miss next year.
I will very much miss weblogs.We always have fun in weblogs and it has helped my writing.I will also miss Mrs.Meeler and all my other teachers. I will miss my brother cause I see him everyday in school.I will also miss all the staff members.l'll miss everyone. And most of all I won't have all you fabulous people listening to me.
In this post I want to thank Ms.Hooper who is our principle who is retiring this year.
Dear Ms.Hooper,
I speak for everyone when I say your the best principle this school has ever had. You're always nice to the students yet you get down to business when necessary.You always do whats best for the students and what can be fun. You always encourage students to do their best and never say never or give up.You've always had the nicest staff of teachers and subs,etc .You've always made sure everything was going its best and nothing bad ever happened.And best of all you've always loved this school. And that's why I say thank you Ms.Hooper for all your hard work for this school.
Sincerely,Jason
In this post we are writing about the Traits, again. So here I go.
The Six Traits
There once were six friends by the names of Jason, Darrin, Zack, Angel,Victor,and Maria. They all were paired up to make a story on the 6 Traits of Writing.But, they argued over which one was most important. They argued so much and was so loud it almost ended up in a fist fight before the teacher came.The teacher finally came and said,"Jason, Ideas and Content are important in a story cause if you didn't have'm,you couldn't have a story. And Darrin, Organization is also important if you didn't have it your story wouldn't make sense. Zack if your story didn't have Voice it would be so very boring.Angel Word Choice makes your story make sense,too. Victor Sentence Fluency is oh so important without it there would be no story.And Maria without Conventions the story would have countless errors.So basically to have a proper story all the Traits are important."So the friends talked it over nicely and agreed that each would use each Trait in their story.So with that knowledge the 6 friends made a magnificent story. They all got A+.
The End
Man that was fun to write! See ya later!
You know how that last post was 'bout da Traits? Well now we're doing them in metaphors. I choose to do Cars! 
Ideas and content- This would be describing the interior and exterior of the car describing the color and the seating and the way it looks.
Organization- This would be the way the engines set up so it runs right.And doesn't mess up.
Voice- The color and type of seat you choose.
Sentence Fluency- How big/wide the tires and seats and enigne is.
Conventions- A messed up transmisson. it would need fixing.
Word Choice- The type of car you would choose.
That was fun! I love writing! Later days!
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