What really matters to me
It's me again, Jason, Jason the reblogtor. This article is about what really matters to me, so let the article begin!
My family really matters to me. My mom, step-dad, and my brother. My house really matters. It has one floor and a basment and purple it was that when we bought it. My dog really matters his name is Buddy and he's a yellow & white Labrador Retreiver. My education really matters I go to JHHouse almost everyday. And my freinds really matter I only have three, but they 're really good friends. What really matters in your life?
Hi Jason,
Every single thing you mentioned that matters to you matters to me, too. You covered a lot of territory and the writing was good but be sure to proofread. I see some careless errors that I bet you could catch with one quick re-read. You have such good thoughts so be sure to build that proofreading in on each post!
One thing that matters in my life besides the things you mentioned are school children. I love working with them and helping them become better writers and thinkers. Do you have any suggestions on ways to get kids to proofread their work? I bet you have some great ideas. Keep up the good thinking and blogging!
Mrs. Davis
Posted by: Anne_Davis | October 20, 2005 at 10:06 AM
Great blog you are very cool!
Posted by: alex | October 20, 2005 at 10:55 AM
Whats up. Du the sky.
Posted by: alex | October 20, 2005 at 10:57 AM