Last week on Tuesday, the chorus kids did a play called Tall-Tales and Heroes. It's a play about John Henry, Calamity Jane, Molly Pitcher, Johnny Appleseed, Paul Bunyan, Davy Crockett and others.
I was real excited and shy about the show. I never knew there would be a lot of people there. There was one of the weblog students there. It was Derrick and some were sitting up laughing there tails off.My best-friend Becky thought I did a good job.
I was playing as the part Shirley. I was in the Paul Bunyan story. It was so fun. In my scene Paul Bunyan is Jake. It was also Lumberjacks. I t was the best day of my life!
I'm going to tell a story about the six traits. We use the six traits for writing. The six traits is important. They help us with our writing. It shows us what we need.
Do you know the six traits? I'll tell you a story about the six traits. One day a paper talked to the six traits. When you use ideas and content you have to know the topic. Ideas said, ''Does my brain have enough ideas.'' Content asked Organization, ''Do you have an organ for your organization.'' ''My readers like that they hear my voice,''replied voice. ''I use any exciting word'' said words. ''I use alot of sentenses, I use complete sentenses,'' said sentence fluency. When I think of conventions I think of every thing.
Last week I did a podcast for Julia. I was so nervous. First I had to type on the computer. Then I had to read it to Mrs. Davis and one of the teachers that helps in the cafeteria for the boy's and girl's club. Sometimes I was excited on the podcast. Ipracticed with Graciela ,Diana, Marisela with there voice. We went out in the hallway to make our vioce louder.We were each on the side of the wall. Graciela was speaking very soft. Diana was speaking soft also so I had to move to the other side so I could hear her.So then she spoke louder so I could hear her.
Would we I was speaking soft would you hear me? explain youanswer.
I am re-doing my first post called My First day. I really did like it when Mrs. Meeler told us to redo our first post. I like it because I never got one single comment. I started re-doing my post today on March 9,2006.
My Favorite Subject
My favorite subject is math. I like math because I get to learn new thngs. In math we are to adding and subtracting factors. I love to subtract and add factors .
Now I'm going to tell you about my pesonal life. My name is Jadae. I'm eleven years old. My birthday is in June . I have one sister and one brother. My sister name is Casaria. My brother's name is Laronnis.
I'm at a new school. Its name is “The Jadae School for Rock Stars.” The courses here are Pink!
My first assignment is to learn to play the drum and sing like a rock star. To be a good rock star, I'm supposed to plays around a lot, to runs across the stage, and to jump at the audience. I did not act like that at my old school, so I think I'll have to work on it for a while; this will be interesting homework.
My second assignment is to learn to have an entourage, which is a group of people that always seems to follow around a rock star. I have a lot of friends, but for this assignment I suddenly have 345,667 people following me around, telling me how blue I am, how they really like my jeans, and how I am the most orange person ever. I can't be sure, but I think they are just saying that.
My final assignment is to put on a rock concert. I have to arrive in a Mountianer and walk the red carpet, past all the laughing fans with cameras flashing in my face. Then, when I get inside, my entourage will be there and I will fly with them to the stage. Next, I'll perform 84 songs, all while claping across the stage, singing, and trying at the audience. This will be the toughest final exam I've ever had, and the one I'll never forget!
Last week a former guest had appeared at my school. Mrs. Anne Davis had came to do a podcasting on the students in weblogging. I was scared because I never been podcasted before.It felt that I was off the wall. When I finished I was on the top of the world. That means that I was happy. If you want to here my podcast Download Jadae.mp3. I really enjoyed it at the end. I tought it was real cool.I'm glad I did the podcast.
Anne Davis came to do a podcast on why we like comments. Sometimes I really enjoy comments except rude comments. She told me to pick our best comment. All my comments are the best. I chose one and it was.....Graciela. I really enjoyed her comment.
When she commented I felt very impressed about what she wrote. While she read my post When I Wokeup as a Grown-Upmade her feel that she would not be an adult. She would be shocked and she would stay as a child. Graceila lives in Conyers Georgia where I live. Graciela and I are like best buddies. It seems like we are just a like we would not want to be an adult.We would rather stay a child.
I like her comment because it tells me when she looked in the mirrior she would scream. That tells me she would rather stay a child. If she had kids she would probally pull her hair out because her kids are a hand full.
If you were in weblogs what would be your favorite comment?explain why.