"A Delicious Story"
What would you do if you woke up one morning and found out that the world was made of candy? Of course, you would be shocked but excited. If you are a person who loves candy and sweets you'll love my story even better! As I woke up one morning, I saw that my blanket was made of hardened, unmeltable, chocolate, with tiny rainbow sprinkles! Then I got up and saw that my pillow was a marshmallow. I was so confused. So I went running to my sister, she to was awake, I asked her what was going on, she didn't know either. Then we both looked out the window, We sure were shocked about what we saw next, The trees were made of chocolate and cotton candy, the grass was mint and the flowers were lollipops, and the dark clouds were also cotton candy. Then we looked below are feet and we know longer had the hard,old carpet, but now the carpet was candies glued together. My sister told me to calm down, so I did. "What are we going to do?" I asked my sister. "Well, we can eat our pillows." she replied."That is not exactly the kind of answer I wanted, lets go check outside and check it out. While we were outside, I couldn't really see that good because it was like at midnight.
To be continued...
Wow, I am a person who loves sweets. I wish I could of been eating candy while reading your story.
CANDY IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE.
Posted by: alecia | January 19, 2006 at 11:13 AM
Graciela - I was so pleased with this story that I just had to write about it on Blog Write. You did an excellent job with your ideas and content.
Keep up the good blogging!
Posted by: Mrs. Meeler | January 20, 2006 at 06:55 AM
Well that was greatest story! Even though it wasn't finished it was a good story.
Posted by: maira | January 20, 2006 at 10:58 AM
I loved your story. If the world was made of candy, I would eat my room and the carpet. I love candy.
Posted by: Theresa | January 20, 2006 at 11:06 AM
Hello Graciala the story was so intersting even though the story wasn't finish.Ihope the story will continued soon.
Posted by: yanet | January 23, 2006 at 09:55 AM
Graciela,I have to say you write pretty well.I'm a candy lover.I can't wait for it to continue.
Posted by: rocio | January 25, 2006 at 11:00 AM
Yanet, I too enjoyed writing this story and typing it in my web log. What was your favorite part? How would you else would you imagine the world?
Posted by: graciela | January 26, 2006 at 05:42 AM
Graciela I liked your post! I LOVE candy!
Posted by: Zachary | January 26, 2006 at 05:43 AM