"A Bed Room"
Ideas and Contents: pictures to hang on the walls.
Organization: Organization is how the room is arranged.
Voice: The voice in the room may be flowers with personality.
Sentence Fluency: Sentence Fluency is what you may have in your room like: bed, television, closet, and bathroom.
Conventions: Dirtiness in a room but is not to be shown.
Word Choice: Bed sheets to match the room.
Hi Diana,
I laughed out loud when I read your conventions - eirtiness in a boom but is not to be shown! How clever!
I really got a kick out of reading all of the blogs. The creativity of the J.H. House bloggers is amazing!
I am very proud of you!
Did you find this blogging easy or hard? Why?
Mrs. Davis
Posted by: Anne Davis | May 04, 2006 at 11:16 AM
Oops! Sorry about the spelling error above. I meant to spell dirtiness. My fingers got in the way of my mind!
Mrs. Davis
Posted by: Anne Davis | May 04, 2006 at 11:17 AM
I found this kind of easy. This was not a hard assighnment to do. It was easy because all we had to do was write a metaphor.
Posted by: Diana | May 11, 2006 at 05:45 AM
whoa
Posted by: yoka | October 06, 2007 at 07:20 PM