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Bronwyn G

I bet you were so excited with your ideas and content and your voice (especially your voice) that your conventions and your sentence fluency seemed to have gone astray.

If I was Mr Smith I would make you do a new apprenticeship with those two guildmasters. Your work made me think of the guilds of olden times. Journalism is still a guild structure.

I hope you are able to carry your writing through. Very few students are so talented at such a young age, but many of them tend to be a little lazy and not a little indifferent to their fate!

Don't let what happened to Mr Smith happen to you.

Remember: "For the want of a nail, the kingdom was lost".

Well done for your great ideas and involving storyline. It showed great organisation.

derrick barbee

Thanks you always give me inspiring comments




Conversation between the Mr. Smith,and Derrick is really amazing to read,although great to share.


The talking the information about the 6Traits,is pretty good and wonderful to read,also wonderful to share.

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Delightful to read the little play on the Six Traits of writing,also about the talking is brilliant to read.

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