Comparing

I am going to compare the six traits to people.

1. Organization- The way we were made.Like the head, stomach, and feet. Which is the beginning, middle, a end.

2. Ideas and Content- Is like the different ways you think or opinions you have or like.

3.Voice- The people who are creatative and stand out.

4.Word choice- People who use a good vocabulary.

5.Sentence Fluency- People and their size and shape.

6. Coventions- Are the peoples organs. If your grammar is wrong you can't have a sentence. So if your organs don't work your body eon't either.

                          WHAT WOULD YOU COMPARE THE SIX TRAITS TO?

                     

Comments

[Anne Davis]

Hi Derrick,

I should have known you would pick people as your metaphor. I think you are one of the best team members of the group. You always encourage others and recognize their contributions to the group. That is an outstanding trait! I also think you have done an outstanding job on the six traits of writing.

I'm curious to know if you do any writing outside of school? You are a good writer! Reading your posts brighten my days!

Mrs. Davis