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Last week  we did another podcast about Ms. Neville's bloggers. We were helping them with their writing. I had Sahil and Cameron. Their writing was so good. They will become good writing in the future. We first practiced on what we were going to say,but I was real nervous though very exicited. I was the second one to do my podcast. Mrs. Davis gives me so much advice, I just love when she comes. On Sahils post I talked about details. I told him details are the gold in your story and also to use the details that make you exicited and happy not lame boring ones.

             Then I had Cameron. On Cameron's post I talked about grabbing attention. I said that he was a good writer,but he needed to work on getting the reader to be interested in what he was writing about.

                                          WHO HAVE YOU HELPED TO IMPROVE IN SOME THING!

Comments

[Anne Davis]

Hi Derrick,
Being nervous and excited at the same time - I have felt that way before. In fact, I feel that way a lot in my teaching when I'm trying something new! You can't wait to see how it goes and you want it to go well! When else have you felt nervous and excited at the same time?

I think you really put your heart into helping others. That is something really special about you and it shows up in your writing and blogging.

One thing I am going to do to help someone in just a few minutes is to assist a Georgia State student in learning how to use a digital camera. Have you ever used a digital camera?

Keep up the excellent learning!

Mrs. Davis

[Theresa]

I had problems in writing before too. But now I am much better.