Eddie's bedtime story Better than the other ones!

          Mrs. Meeler showed us a cool website were you put in words and the computer will make a story. Here is mine.

Batistia had everything a the riches man could ask for. He had obesite food, a big, discombobulated bed, and the Bomb family to look after him.

One morning Batistia woke up. “I'm hungry!” he said. He went down to the bathroom but everyone in the Bomb family was still asleep. “I guess I'll have to find my own breakfast,” he said.

Batistia went outside and Batistia bombed Eddie Guerro down the street. On the sidewalk, he saw a lovely Atlantla . “Gulp!” Down went the Atlantla . “Not bad!” said Batistia .

Next, Batistia headed for the park. There he found a pair of McDonalds just sitting on a bench. “Gulp! Gulp.” Down went the McDonalds . “Mmmm, ugly!” said Batistia .

Batistia was feeling very cute as he skipped over to a video store. There he saw some tasty video games. “Gulp! Gulp! Gulp!” Batistia swallowed Grand Thef Auto and Wrestle Mania 22 whole.

“Wooooooooo!! It must be time to go home,” said Batistia . He ran like a girl back back home and up the stairs to his discombobulated bed.

“Breakfast! Time for breakfast, Batistia !” called Mrs. Bomb.

“I don't feel very well,” groaned Batistia . “It must have been those burito I ate for supper last night.” Burp!

Comments

[Mrs. Meeler]

Funny story Derrick!

You forgot to include the hyperlink to the website. What if one of Mr. Brune's students read your post and wanted to go create it a wacky tale. They wouldn't know where to go to find it.

[Mrs. Emmert]

Derrick: that is really cool that Mrs. Meeler shows you that website. I might have to go there to create my own story!

[jake]

Ha Ha Ha. That is so funny. I loved it make more of them.