Angel the King of Computers

The 6 Traits of Kings

           Today the king of kings will tell you about the six traits of writing and you readers will be amazed and satisfied after you read this. I will teach you about helpful hints and they are Ideas and Content, Organization, Voice, Word Choice, Sentence fluency, and Conventions. If I were you I would write some of these helpful hints on a piece of paper so now our first category is ideas and content.

            Ideas and Content

            1.Think of a good exciting topic by brainstorming.

            2.Make sure you have enough details in each and every sentence.

            3.Make sure when readers read your story, they know what you are saying.

            4.Get all of your ideas together and make sure you have enough.

            Organization

            1.Look very carefully at how your topic starts like.

            2.Make sure your story has a good beginning, middle, and end.

            3.Look carefully at how the story ends.

            4. Make your writing look easy to read.

            Voice

            1.If you think of something exciting during writing, write it down and your grade will go up.

            2.Make your readers think and feel the story while reading it.

            3.If you did not like what you wrote in your story, then think of a much better idea.

            4.Did you give an opinion?

            5.Are you comfortable with your story?

            Word Choice

            1.Use as many exciting words you got in your mind.

            2.Ask yourself if you got people's attention.

            3.Use vivid vocabulary.

            Sentence Fluency

            1.Make sure you have more than five sentences so your story won't be so short.

            2.Complete all of your sentences and correct them, but take your time.

            3.Make some of your sentences long and creative.

            4.Read your story aloud and make sure it makes sense.

            Conventions

            1.Do not make all of your letters cramp up together because your readers would not know what you are saying.

            2.Make your title name go along with the story.

            3.Check for every error in your story and correct them but if you do not know how to correct, ask for help from a buddy or a teacher.

            4.Use correct punctuation.

            5.Look at and see what is the main idea.

            

                                     The End

     Now What do you do when you start a story?

            

            

Here Comes The ? Man

     Today the Question Man will ask questions to my teacher Mrs.Henning, but she is not answering them. Instead I will be answering them because I did not have time to ask her questions. When Mrs. Henning reads this blog and tells me if I got a answer right I will be very excited.

     This is a hard blog for me because today is Thursday and I got tons of test and next week is the CRCT Test so all of you kids better study hard. In my 2nd paragraph will be my questions and answers  so that means to not be yourself and wear a mask.

  Angel: When did you start teaching and why?

    Mrs. Henning: I started in 2000 or 2001 and to help kids learn and a good job.

   Angel:When will you retire your job?

    Mrs Henning:I will retire in 2010.

    Angel:Do you think you are doing a good job of teaching?

    Mrs. Henning:I think between yes and no.

    Angel:What do you feel when your students go off in Middle School?

   Mrs. Henning:I feel very sad  and happy for them and hope they will be teacher some day.

   Ending

   Well it is the end of the day and I hope those questions helped your mind think alot. Remember to comment to my blog because it is almost the end of the day and here is my E.G. Question of the day.

                  What kind of questions do you have for your teacher?, and if you do this is your show, "Yo beep".